Comments for Stasis http://stasis.wordpress.com Defunct Stagnation Sun, 03 Aug 2008 15:53:28 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on A Ponderance on Existence by HraTaika http://stasis.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/a-ponderance-on-existence/#comment-5 HraTaika Sun, 03 Aug 2008 15:53:28 +0000 http://stasis.wordpress.com/?p=11#comment-5 Noni, mä tiesin. Sä oot vaan niin sekaisin. xD Noni, mä tiesin. Sä oot vaan niin sekaisin. xD

]]> Comment on Part the Second: Paranoia by Dd Firebolt! http://stasis.wordpress.com/2008/06/11/paranoia/#comment-4 Dd Firebolt! Wed, 11 Jun 2008 00:58:29 +0000 http://stasis.wordpress.com/?p=5#comment-4 this one is the best! for me at least, that's why i decided to comment here about the three, ok the first one is cool, it gives a lot of the mental stuff of "the special person" but it gives no physical appereance so for me as a reader i can't imagine how he is, however it's not that important since it's a short chapter based only on mental stuff so my comment is completely useless hahaha... the second, is the best, it really makes you feel paranoid! hahahaha i mean i did think that someone was following him and all that stuff, well done, your writing really gives the reader the right feeling, in an intense way, and oh when i read of that squirrel (hahahaha xD LOL, really fun) i really had a heart attack! like "OMG!!!". And the third one really creates in the reader a curious feeling, coz you know the whole thing is focused on the knives and the key and all that, but referring to a woman, an unknown woman, of whom you know nothing and you learn so little that you wanna know more about why he is referring to her... well i hope this comments are useful (or whatever you may find them), your writing is good, very good, like your photography!... ;)... take care ^^ and keep writing! ^^ XOXO Dd Firebolt this one is the best! for me at least, that’s why i decided to comment here about the three, ok the first one is cool, it gives a lot of the mental stuff of “the special person” but it gives no physical appereance so for me as a reader i can’t imagine how he is, however it’s not that important since it’s a short chapter based only on mental stuff so my comment is completely useless hahaha…
the second, is the best, it really makes you feel paranoid! hahahaha i mean i did think that someone was following him and all that stuff, well done, your writing really gives the reader the right feeling, in an intense way, and oh when i read of that squirrel (hahahaha xD LOL, really fun) i really had a heart attack! like “OMG!!!”.
And the third one really creates in the reader a curious feeling, coz you know the whole thing is focused on the knives and the key and all that, but referring to a woman, an unknown woman, of whom you know nothing and you learn so little that you wanna know more about why he is referring to her…
well i hope this comments are useful (or whatever you may find them), your writing is good, very good, like your photography!… ;) … take care ^^ and keep writing! ^^

XOXO Dd Firebolt

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